My Story sounds really good and flowing. I sort of altered the story and made changes to fit more and make it more interesting to children. My story also made since, this is because unlike any other things we have had in the past i have thought a lot about my story. i thought more about this because i really like making up story for children and being very creative and getting to use my mind for children's enjoyment.
I think that i still need to make more changes and get more of my story done. The changes i think i should make is make a climax and more adventure and mystery to it. I want to make changes like that because my story is sort of dull and goes on and on with out no type of excitement.
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