My Story takes four days and this is how it goes:
Day One - The main character finds her boyfriend at a restaurant with another girl and they break up, she cries to her two best friends that night.
Day Two - She gets up early to take a walk and get what happened the night before out her mind and drops her ring in the mud. A puppy sitting near by offers to get it for her if she feed him, loves him, takes care of him and takes him to an authentic Mexican fiesta. She agrees and starts to do these things.
Day Three - She takes her new puppy to her best friends house and tell them the story of how she found him and what she needs to do. They start to help her.
Day Four - This day goes by smoothly because they just take the puppy to get groomed and get him toys and things like that. This is the night of the Fiesta. She brings him here and at 12 o`clock the puppy turns in to a Prince and tells her that a spell was cast on him, and that if a girl feeds him, loves him, takes care of him and takes him to an authentic Mexican fiesta he will turn back into his normal self, and she will become his girlfriend/ princess and they will live happily ever after.
This is how my story goes without the little things in there, the thing that will connect each day is her happiness level will get better, and she becomes more happy and into life.
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Good layout, I think your story will be a good one. However, I personally like it more when there's a little more drama. For example if she refuses to take him home. But it was still good.
ReplyDeleteGood format of your story, it should be more conflicts between characters
ReplyDeleteGood job on really on explaining your days in detail it should make putting your story on pages a lot easier.
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